Monday 6 May 2013

Statement of Position


Statement of position
By Emma and Mahrae

On Friday 3rd of May, Yr 5 tried to write the best statement of position for the topic Everyone should learn to cook. We tried to use rhetorical questions, alliteration, language of opinion and interesting sentences.  We wanted to make it really interesting for the audience. Here are some of them:


How would you like to be a famous chef like Jamie Oliver? It’s as simple  as learning how to cook. Common sense determines that learning to cook can lead to many things. For an example you can become a  professional, surprise your mum for Mothers Day’s or even be able to know how to cook in the bush when you’re camping.
By Mahrae and Emma

Have you heard of Jamie Oliver? I bet you have. He’s one of the most famous chefs in the world. How would you like to be someone like him? Five stars restaurants, your own TV show, adored by the world. Common sense determines that if you want to be like him then you have to learn to cook.  Reasons you should learn to cook include passing down generations of delicious recipes, saving money and even making money!
By Mikayla


Does your kitchen rule? It is true to say that your kitchen will rule if you learn to cook. If you learn to cook, the chances you will be a natural are high.  There are so many famous cooks out there, you could be one, you could even have your own TV show. Wouldn’t your mum love to relax on her birthday and Mother’s Day?  If you learn to cook she can!
By Meg

Wouldn't it feel good to be owning a five star restaurant, or owning your own cooking tv show? That is what cooking can do for you. It can be left with no doubt that everyone should learn to cook. You could learn to cook yourself, save money and even be one of the famous chefs. You could be Adriano Zumbo, cooking famous desserts or Jamie Oliver, cooking famous dishes that taste sensational. Would you like to be a professional chef, watched by millions on tv?
By Michael V and Samuel

7 comments:

  1. Emma

    Great job year 5 of doing these GREAT statements of position!!!!!

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  2. Tracey
    I like the statements of position. Hope we do it again some time.

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  3. Lily

    Wow that's great everybody, even though I wasn't there to do it, it looks like fun. I hope we do it again some time

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  4. Angelica

    Great blog post Mahrae and Emma. Great statement of position year 5.
    We had alot of awesome statement of position sentences.

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  5. Good job on the blog post Mahrae and Emma. These statement of positions are very persuasive. Great job everyone!

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  6. Excellent blog post Emma and Mahrae there was alot of writing and the writing is all colourful.

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  7. Lily

    Great blog post Emma and Mahrae, I liked how you used different colours for the statements of position and it looks really good.

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